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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Mysty, Nov 14, 2012.



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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Some nights the noise
    is so loud that the silence
    is deafening.

    There is no rest for the wicked
    and no play for the lonely.
    Wishes to be transported
    into paradise but unsure
    of what to do there.

    Unsure of a welcome
    from like and kindred souls
    do they want the bother
    of knowing another like them?

    Are compassion and kindness
    dying? Where has our
    humanity gone?

    It must have drowned
    in the deafening silence
    that
    no one heard.

    ©2012 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Nov 14, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Nice peace ((pun intended I assure you LOL)). Seems to be a cryptic message of sorts: Do NOT allow a humanity once mired in compassion to fade the way of your deafening silence as kindness becomes a thing of the past. This made for a nice read Mysty ==> Thanks for the share ;)

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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 17, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank You Ms Jacquii :) I never know where a piece will take me until it is done lol. Glad you liked it :)


    Posted By Mysty | Nov 26, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Same here. Sometimes it's eerie even how a piece can take on a life of its own...almost a mania of sorts to get the words spilled and/or spelled out LOL
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 26, 2012
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    Very beautiful poem, well expressed, with such a profound depth to it. Thanks for sharing
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    I've heard the silence. Would that the rest of humanity could hear it too.
    Loved it Misty but then again I love everything you've written!
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