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    mistyllspoetry Billy Corgan's Shadow

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    Gentle blue full rhyme strips.
    Roamed written sight and clear.
    Sea pillow death.
    Sleeping thin bees
    behind golden smiles.
    Earth's torrent stars.

    Widen conifer clouds.
    White light past lines.
    Tree of bard waves.
    Love free.
    Skies tent bed's motion.
    Holes like depth's ocean.
    Wind remains.

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey MISTY - this is an interesting abstract. Silent Laughter as wind? Very nice metaphorically speaking. Also see other nature nuance within. A dark piece but interesting ideas.

    I think a very nice piece of poetry.
    Thanx for the sharing.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 27, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    very interesting and wonderful penning Misty love the visual images
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 8, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    hmmm interesting.
    it has a different meaning/feeling altogether when you say it...
    thanks for the poem!
    *huggles*

    Jeez Banned

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    Interesting write..

    The laughter is
    rideing the wind,
    echoing in the
    sound of the
    waves.

    At least that
    is what ' thought
    ' heard.

    Thanks for
    the read.:reefer:


    Posted By Jeez | May 8, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    Thank you for the visuals...and these thoughts running through my mind...lol. I liked this one very much. Interesting read, indeed!


    Posted By Benny | May 11, 2007
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