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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~SMOOTH INK~

    You got me drowning
    in your ink,
    eating your
    screen dust.
    your images curl
    around the nuances of
    my nerves like the
    S around UCK of
    my efforts on Haldol.

    Your style slams
    my confidence like a
    door in the face,
    every beat on
    the blue pond of the
    mind animates a
    verb or a noun of the
    wow kind till you’re
    at the end of any
    thought of excellence.

    Your words are hot
    like the sun in rare form
    burning little
    suns in the screen.
    With smoking pen you
    burn the pages blowing
    rhythm from the
    white hot tip of rhyme.

    Your ink’s as smooth
    as ocean on the surface
    of a calm yet waves
    of cool emotion
    rage a storm
    of provoked envy.

    Your syllables could
    silence a storm, sight
    the blind till
    they saw a
    shape of original
    in your beautiful mind.

    © May 8, 2007 Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 30, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Karen,

    :wow: Where does one begin to review your outstandingly detailed, vivid, luscious, vibrant, bold, colorful, and aesthetic poetry? Loved it!

    Kim :)

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much Kim...glad ya liked.
    I am really proud of this one so it means alot :peace:


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 30, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Moonchild WOW beautifully written very passionate emotions simply I love this poem
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 30, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much Thomas.
    Glad ya liked, I appreciate it(hugs):hearts:


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 31, 2007
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