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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Harry, Dec 7, 2006.



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    SOLACE


    tears fall from
    apologetic eyes

    voice, hushed
    against the tempo
    of summer rainstorm,
    struggles to utter
    the words you
    long to hear.

    inside the cradle
    of your gentle
    embrace,
    I finally find
    solace.


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    laced with gentle emotion, well-versed write:bravo:

    hope to read more from you, Harry:huggles:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    Ohhh, Harry! This was just so beautiful - nearly brought tears to my own eyes! I am so glad that you are starting to post your poetry now! Such talent should not be hidden away!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 7, 2006
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    thanks so much Lisa and Tree:huggles:

    your responses amaze me:friends:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    athlone www.poetrypages4u.com

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    poignant. but i'm curious to know why the eyes are apologetic.
    enjoyed the read.
    Zvi
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    Posted By athlone | Dec 7, 2006
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    Hi Zvi,

    the eyes are "apologetic" because I was writing from the viewpoint of one who has done wrong and is seeking forgiveness

    thanks for the read:D


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    you are very welcome dear Harry:kiss:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    thanks again, Lisa:bye:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 7, 2006
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    I was wondering about the "apologetic eyes" too, thanks for explaining:girlwacko:


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    Dear Harry,

    This was simply exquisite. Poignantly beautiful, and well executed. I read this several times, and each time the visual was just as intense as the first read. I will keep my eye out on your work, as you have already shown us that you are a master of this craft. LOVED IT!!!!! Take Care. ;)

    Painted

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    Painted, your response has made my day, many thanks for your kinds words:huggles:

    when the muse hits me again, I will post again :yeahbaby:


    Lisa, you are welcome for the explanation:bye:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 8, 2006
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    Harry, I look forward to reading more of your work, hope the muse blesses you soon:yayjpic:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 8, 2006
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    in its brevity, this spoke volumes; well done!

    write on,
    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    many thanks, sage:D


    Posted By Harry | Dec 8, 2006
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    you're welcome harry; your work is superb, I look forward to reading more.

    write on,
    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    thanks again sage:D


    hey Lisa, I hope the muse blesses me soon too, thanks!:kiss3:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 9, 2006
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    most welcome harry!!!;)

    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 9, 2006
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    thanks again Sage, you are too kind:huggles:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 11, 2006
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    :word_hello: :toot: :huggles: :bye: :jump:

    have a great week!


    Posted By sage | Dec 11, 2006
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    Hey Harry! Ever since you posted this, I've been waiting and waiting for you to treat us to another! You will give us another, won't you???


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