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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Something New Begins

    Her golden blond hair rests against my chest
    As we lay across the black bear rug
    Pillows inundating the head of our hidden sanctum
    She listens to my breathing,
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    She can hear my heart beating
    My grin is enchantingly seductive
    O yeah? She’s always been a zany girl.
    With lustful cheeks radiating red
    ~
    Staring at her uncovered thigh, I whisper
    Your heart’s beating also
    Her crystal clear blue eyes ogle into mine
    Two fidgety bodies lying side by side
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    Their long slender fingers intertwined
    My bare muscles scintillate as the new sun appears
    Dawn radiates through green forest umbrella
    Our bodies now wrapped in robes
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    We scurry down the stairs
    “I’ll make breakfast” she vociferates
    Something new begins for us
    “A new love” Maybe?


    Posted By Bear | May 4, 2008
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    RonPrice Mr Ron Price

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    Graphic poetic depiction and excellent depiction. Scintillate--take the "s" off. Yes, there are so many "maybes" in life. I once heard a story that: the most important and wise word is: "perhaps."

    "All these lovely poems which after all give the ultimate shape to one's life," wrote D.H. Lawrence. This was definitely some shape, for now.-Ron--best wishes


    Posted By RonPrice | May 7, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Ron for your magnificent comment and Ill take that s off thank you for noticing that and telling me,
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 7, 2008
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    That was so sweet and beautiful. Very nice imagery as well. I love the ending with the maybe. So many maybes in life, I hope the maybe of this poem happens though :)

    Nice poem
    Keep up the great work Bear

    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    this is a beautiful and descriptive poem.

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much my sweet deep__poet for all your fantastic comments I appreciate everyone of them
    biggbear hugs ans a soft kiss to your cheek
    bear
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    thank you so much for your lovely comment Mysticpoet
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 20, 2008
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