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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Apr 21, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Southern Skies
    ~
    The alabaster moon is radiant and beautiful tonight,
    As it sheds an eerie incandescent beam of light,
    I wonder if this cadaverous sight appears,
    Before you, as it appears here,
    Or whether in the high southern skies,
    Does it have a very different image there.
    ~
    The stars are lustrous and illuminating,
    Seemingly to loom closer to the Earth,
    I yearn to visit you and gaze skyward.,
    At the magnificent wonders
    Clear of northern city’s smog.


    Posted By Bear | Apr 21, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow TOM - This poem is very nicely scribed - I really love the word "alabaster" - just beautiful + I once had a dog - She was just a cutiepie; she was all black with a white spot on her foot. She was a stray that I found in an alley - So I named her Alabaster (I called her Alley Girl) Ah- The irony :roflmao:

    Anyway - I found this poem very soothing and calming - reminds of a brilliant Spring night in Tennessee.

    Very nice sharing = Thanx.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 22, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Ms.J

    Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Maybe some day Ill get to see a tenn. spring night
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 23, 2007
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    Thomas...this is wonderfully done! I love my southern skies...and felt every one of these words. Great job, muse!


    Posted By Benny | Apr 25, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Benny

    Thank you so much for your great comment I too love the southern skies even though I have only been able to see a couple of sunsets and sunrises when I visited down in fla. I live in Illinois,
    handshakes
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 26, 2007
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    This felt nice and
    calm, as it brought
    soothing images
    to mind.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 26, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Jeez

    Thank you so much I try to bring a tranquility to all my poems especially my nature poems I am very happy you enjoyed southerm skies
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 26, 2007
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    Love your poem

    Thomas,

    I want to thank you for your beautiful poem.More than beautiful its perfect and I love the music of those words and all those amazing images so delicate and strong at the same time-Thank you so much for all that !....

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Maria

    Thank you so much for this most magnificent comment
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 26, 2007
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