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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much Painted and Jacquii, appreciate it :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 24, 2008
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    Anthropomorphism or Personification



    Michael the Mountain




    Hello ... my name is Michael and I am a Mountain... tall dark with some grey
    today my mood would have to be a very bright color
    real bright ...you feel me

    I am a Mountain tall dark with some grey
    lately there have been a lot of bullets
    flying flying like birds they fly fly fly
    their seems to be every week another
    tall dark mountain some times grey
    that crumbles

    like my dad back in 1984
    what a mountain he was
    tall dark grey
    bullets were flying flying flying like birds
    and he crumbled

    and it is all so sad
    to see a mountain crumble

    speaking
    from personal
    experience

    I rejoice or I am happy

    I am a mountain... I don't crumble and I don't shake
    really all of the birds love me
    they just want to know if I love them

    while I ponder what it would be
    like to be in love with a river that
    only flows for me you feel me



    thanks for allowing me to spark
    Mountains teach us to be all that we can be ... Dr. Jewell Pookrum


    Posted By michael | Aug 16, 2015
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    Michael:

    Yep I feel you. Mountains are strong, yet they crumble.
    "to be in love with the river that only flows for me."
    Excellent!. That was in depth and with great feeling. Yep I feel you.
    Great poem.

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    Wow...I really feel you to
    I really appreciate your comments. I'm very happy that you can feel or understand what i'm saying
    I really did not follow all of the rules for this challenge ........I picked a mountain well anyway thank you so much talk soon


    Posted By michael | Dec 19, 2015
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