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    alanmdouglas ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty

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    Dear Guys,

    We now have 9 responses from 6 people, with Therese and Sis leading the way with 3 and 2.

    And if you look at the VARIETY of areas covered and the amount of GOOD poems produced full of great lines AND poet's-eye insight, we can all be very proud of ourselves.

    I reckon that if we put this up somewhere as a competition for those not in the know to find what the commonality in these 9 poems is, they could find "comeuppance" and maybe one or two others, but would NEVER get all 10 challenge words.

    Well done to all of us. Another challenge coming, but do add to this one if your muse permits. If it doesn't. write another anyway, kick it into shape.

    Love
    Alan

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    The pear must stay positive,combine quick with quiet,
    No peace, but comeuppance, for this alternative rubbish diet
    The pear must stay resourceful TMH 2/19/2012


    Posted By tham | Feb 19, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh how I miss the JPiC creativity outlet -such evocative stuff.
    Nice write Tham -- positive and resourceful = I can dig it :thumbsup:

    J.

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    On The Inner Beauty Of Hanifa Shaqeata Amina Jenkins



    And although she had a big pear shape figure
    as in slender on the top and big and round at or near the bottom
    She had a very positive manner about her
    when you saw her you knew it was not just about her ass her face
    a complete resource of wisdom old school and new school she is
    like Google but even more deeper than that
    and quiet not talking and talking and talking
    about some o rubbish
    It was really quick when she said I love you Michael
    I say really maybe we should not go their yet
    she said that she had already gone their
    and she did not like the alternative to not loving me
    when I combine
    everything that I have learned from her it
    screams of inner beauty more so than any outward appearance
    any one that would oppose her or bring harm to her
    just know your comeuppance is coming
    and then their would be peace


    Her name is fictional


    Posted By michael | Nov 21, 2015
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    Thoughts of Peace
    Quick the rubbish from the mind
    Think positive thoughts of peace,
    Combined resources shared in kind
    Can cause chaos to cease.
    No alternate comeuppance
    For the many who amend,
    And join the "Pears for Peace" petition
    To bring disorder to a quiet end.


    Posted By Forestdawn | Dec 7, 2015
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    michael JPiC Contributor

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    I would like to join the pears for peace.....

    Face Book Friend


    A positive place to find friends I think
    once you get past all of the rubbish
    and some may even be peaceful encounters
    which is a very good alternative to some
    of the conversations I've heard about
    people talk about all kinds of things
    including the comeuppance of one another
    the price of pears
    how some are more quite than others
    how quick one can find love
    when you combine all of this
    it may be a great resource to find friends





    Posted By michael | Jan 4, 2016
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    The Peaceful Society Or Somewhere Over The Rainbow



    All attempts at peace have not been exhausted. We will find a way.
    And the alternative to being black or white is... you don't have to be a color
    You can just do u and we can combine
    everybody dat ain't about dat bullshit dat rubbish
    I am positive that whoever you are we takin all comers
    And we will use every resource available
    rid are self of monsters inside as well as outside
    Piick 6 pick up sticks Private prison population peculiar predicament
    and the comeuppance one could expect to receive there
    I now quite my mind as I see my friend approaching
    And quick without wasting any time she say's " Michael
    this golden poppin pear grown only on a tree that I have planted
    and watched grow is for you." I say thank you... your like the rainbow
    after a shower





    The dual title style or as many titles as you prefer I can attribute to
    the late great... writer poet activist June Jordan


    Posted By michael | Mar 29, 2017
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