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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    SPRING INSPIRES ME ~ DOUBLE ETHEREE

    Warm
    sunshine
    puts me in
    the mood to write
    when spring returns with
    flowers delight. From bees
    to butterfly wings to the
    wake up call that the robin sings
    to pretty petals and garden swings.
    April rains a bit of inspiration.
    Sprouting her flowers in exultation,
    A spider in dew of sun-drop dawn
    weaves his silk web on fresh cut lawn
    while bunnies chase their fluff tails.
    Inch worms inch up cattails.
    Spring has much to write,
    from birds in flight
    to raindrops
    on a
    bud.

    © April 17, 2007 Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 29, 2008
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    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Love this poem! Your images are vivid and the lines easy to read. I don't know much about poetry forms so it took me a few minutes to realize what you were doing, lol. I love how the syllables are increased in each line then it mirrors back down.

    The above quote, to me, is the most vivid and on the same line as I see flowers in Spring. I feel like dandelions, the bane of a lot of property owners, are Mother Nature's way of saying, "Look what I can do!"

    hugs,
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    Thank you Gail...you are so kind*hugs*
    I feel like them dandelions sometimes too :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 29, 2008
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    Tha-Emissary Black Knight!

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    Very Nice Poem & Great Illustration. Your words are worth a thousand pictures of wonderful spring & new life!

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Hi Tha-Emissary and thank you so much for reading my poem.
    I'm glad you liked and enjoyed the springiness of it :)
    Welcome to JPIC!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 30, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Aw! This is a beautifully inspired write of Spring KAREN - I like it - flows just wonderfully - BUT...........it's 36 in Tennessee this morning and has been cold all week long - MS GAIL just said it's snowing in Pennsylvania o_O --- Where the hell is Spring??? LOL

    Great poem though- love the shape of the double etheree = Thanx for the sharing!

    Jacquii.

    ps - very nice image to go with the poem too.
    The words describe the scenary quite nicely ;)


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 30, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much for the sweet words Jacquii*hugs*
    I always liked the shape of these too. It's finally getting warmer here in Pa.
    but where on earth was it snowing here in Pa, not where I live
    which is not to far from Philly.


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    I'm in southwest PA, Moonchild! Nearer to Pittsburg.

    hugs,
    Gail


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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Oh Gail it was snowing out in Pittsburg...shows how much I watch
    the news...lol No really I do watch the news every day I guess I just didn't
    know for some reason. It was like 72 degrees today where I am.
    Glad I'm not near Pittsburg. My friend's cousin lives in Pittsburg.


    Posted By Moonchild | May 2, 2008
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    reasonrhymer New Member

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    Karen,

    Very nice,

    flowers delight. From bees
    to butterfly wings to the
    wake up call that the robin sings
    to pretty petals and garden swings.

    Very, very, nice,

    Here in California, the baby cottontails are out in mass. A few snakes too.

    lv,

    George

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you so much George!
    I'm glad you like it*hugs*


    Posted By Moonchild | May 3, 2008
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