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    Chimes sing a melodious wind song,
    Tree limbs sponge-painted with greenery,
    Gentle warmth not felt for months,
    Peepers proudly proclaim the same…
    Spring is here!



    This will explain Peepers better than I can. Scroll down to Spring Peepers...
    treefrogs


    Posted By butchiesmom | Apr 1, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Wonderful images in few words.
    Yah spring is here!
    Loved this, thanks!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 1, 2008
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    Thanks Moonchild! I don't usually stop after a few words, lol. I'm glad you could see the images.
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    Posted By butchiesmom | Apr 1, 2008
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    suprised that you only wrote such a short poem.lol but it is a good one


    Posted By crazymamma5 | Apr 3, 2008
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    Few words, much description, lol.
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    Posted By butchiesmom | Apr 3, 2008
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    Gail,
    Love this, great poem, beautiful images. Thank you for sharing this.


    Posted By Eric | Apr 14, 2008
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    Thanks, Eric, I'm glad you like it. I write very little poetry anymore but just couldn't resist trying my hand at it again.

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    Loverley...doesn't matter that it's short...it's good so:)


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    Thank you, solo! Sometimes fewer words make a better picture, lol.
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    Reality drawn from natures detals is always such a surprise to read.


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    Thank you, Jolie and Happy Birthday!

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