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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Here's an old piece I found earlier and felt compelled to dust off. It's entitled Stepping In To The Dark Again. I thought I'd share it because the sentiments are sweet and sweet sentiments are welcome all the time. Hope you enjoy it.

    Stepping In To The Dark Again

    A cherubim with lonely eyes
    (lurking in the shadow of my shadow)
    met me dreaming in Technicolor.
    Her feathers whispered my name,
    smiling a torchsong trilogy the whole
    while. Strangely she flew away
    when I woke. As if she were
    supposed to. I remember though.
    (the hint of rustling feathers)
    Her breath tasted of beauty,
    of fear and of lavender hyacinth,
    and of orange blossom blessed
    with the slightest pale honeysuckle.


    Copyright © Jacquii Cooke



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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 6, 2012
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    OOH Ms Jacquii That is truly beautiful and ooh the visions that dance in my mind from these beautiful lines. I too could almost taste her from your description. My favorite lines, the most exquisite lines:
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    Her breath tasted of beauty,
    of fear and of lavender hyacinth,
    and of orange blossom blessed
    with the slightest pale honeysuckle.
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    Posted By Mysty | Oct 13, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanks for the read and the poetic love girl!
    Glad you enjoyed ;)

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 13, 2012
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    I agree with Mysty, Sis. I wish my dreams could be like that.
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    Ha! Me too. It's been a minute since I've actually remembered any of my dreams. When I do - it's usually an eerie feeling. So yeah... Thought I'd share this piece that evokes merriment in dreamscape! Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed.

    J.


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    Howdy Ms Jacquii,:giftrose:
    Oh! Woooww! This is a real masterpiece from your beautiful poetic heart.
    I can smell, feel and taste all flavours from your work of art.
    Your electrifying poetical lines generates the most powerful feelings
    in the heart of the readers. I am impressed at your artistic talents.
    Yes! Your powerful words indeed, stimulate imagination and pure inspiration.
    Thank you so much for showing your poetic love and for sharing with the world!
    I come here this day to show my poetic love to you, Ms. Jacquii.
    I send all my friendship love on your way.
    Blessings,
    Poet Starry.:giftrose:
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    I mean, "Your electrifying poetical lines generate powerful feelings in readers' hearts."
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    Well thanks so very much for the read and the poetic love Ms. Starry!
    Much appreciation = Glad you enjoyed the poem. About Facebook... I tried adding you again - but can't - so you'll have to send me a friends request https://www.facebook.com/jacquiicooke ;)

    J.


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    Hi Ms. Jacquii,
    Thank you for your kind reply!
    About Facebook, I have already sent a friend request to you. You would have to accept it, if you wish.
    I am looking forward to seeing you there in FB, so that we may CHAT...
    Anyway, great poem you have generated from your poetic soul, dear friend Ms. Jacquii.
    All the Best,
    Starry.
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanks again Starry. I don't see an FB request from you though :(
    In fact - I can't even search for your name on my own personal account. It's like I'd been deleted and blocked :(
    IDK - but it's an issue on your side. And I don't know how to fix it. Sorry :(
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    Hi Ms. Jacquii,:giftrose:
    Thank you for your kind reply!
    I have been searching for an answer about Facebook. I think I have an FB issue.
    FB must have blocked me for 30 days, and I am unable to ask for a friend's request for that time.
    You can try to ask me for a friend request, if you wish. Then, I'll accept it.
    I have a different pen name there. It is: Moni Angel-Poet.
    I would love to get connected with you again, my dear friend, Ms. Jacquii.
    It is NOT MY FAULT. It is Facebook's fault. They have too many customers, I think...
    Anyway, we are here, and you can count with me for comments and poetic love.
    If I got a new poem to share, I would share it for sure.
    I am not writing poems lately. I guess my muse has run dry.
    Take good care of yourself, sweetheart!
    All the Best,
    Starry.:giftrose:


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    Funny - you're Muse has "run dry" and mine has started to make a brief appearance lately. I've written more poems in this past month than I have all year long! Anyway - Facebook issues ((sigh...)) I cannot even browse to your page using my personal account. We're still friends with the Poetry I. Color account though. Just let me know when your account has been unlimited and send a request to my personal account again ;)

    J.
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    Hi Ms. Jacquii,:peace:
    Thank you again for your kind reply! You sound like a super friend.
    Well, telling you about Facebook, the problem is that I sent too many friend requests
    over the past months. Facebook notified me that I am NOT able to send any more friend request
    for the next 30 days. However, I take a look at the message, and it always says the same thing,
    even though the time passes. The same message appears to me about the 30 days penalty. I am blocked in Facebook, something which prevents me from sending friend request to other people. I guess Facebook owners are bad folks...
    I am NOT able to send any friend request to anybody. I tried to send a friend request to Mysty Johnson,
    and the same message appears on the screen that I am NOT able to ask for friend request for 30 days,
    and they say the same thing every single day, for I do try again every day...
    Ms. Jacquii, we are still friends in JPiC Forum for Writers and Poets, so you may send me a message or
    even CHAT with me through that...
    Anyway, I let you know that I did NOT unfriend you, for you are my dear everlasting friend.
    I was looking at houses to buy in Murfreesboro, TN. I found real nices ones with reasonable prices.
    But, I am not sure where I'll buy my new home in the USA.
    If God helps me, I shall buy a home in the USA somewhere. I prefer a lovely Southern State.
    I would love to go into THE MUSIC WORLD. I sing and write lyrics too...
    I would love to form a MUSICAL BAND IN THE USA. Do you think I am crazy, Ms. Jacquii?
    I know I still hold MANY DREAMS IN MY HEART OF HEARTS.
    Have a blessed time, my dear friend, Ms. Jacquii with all those you love!
    Blessings & All the Best,
    Poet Starry.:giftrose:


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    Arg - sounds like your account has been limited. And I really have no idea how to deal with that. Hopefully after a certain amount of time you'll be able to add friends again. So = keeping my fingers crossed for you ;)

    J.
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    Righteous! One Cherubims ode to another .. So now you speak the language of the heavens too Ms J!
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    Aw! You are much to kind! Thanks for the poetic love my friend. And though I've never been accused of being a cherubim by any stretch of the imagination LOL - I appreciate the very kind flattery! Perhaps the world could be a better place if we all considered each other cherubims as to live as if defining our world as the heaven we hope to reach one day!

    Yes! I speak the language of the heavens. Thanks Jon :wub:

    J.


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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    I love you Ms J and like everyone that loves anyone I see an angel in you for sure!
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    Now if I could get a round trip ticket to Kolkotta. Scoop you up, fly you across the seas and....make beautiful poetry with you.
    :sheeplove:
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