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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Terence, Feb 13, 2008.



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    On this Valentine’s Day our clear exchange of glances could be misconstrued -
    depending upon whether one saw how our eyes shone, one may well conclude
    there is a romantic anima in my hello_Okay, I must admit, it could be argued
    we’re often seen in touch, you holding my attention, in conversation, subdued.
    But shouldn’t they espouse basic human decencies and not harbor some crude
    thought that arose easily. So now I am your paramour, the person who wooed
    you shamelessly, so ultimately I can devour your innocence with all my lewd
    intentions. Rot! Not that I would resist if a better relationship could be pursued
    without there being new hype igniting the situation. No, I can’t bear to delude
    myself. You have a very lovely outgoing personality that shall evermore elude
    my desires. And now I am sorry that, on my arm, I had your name tattooed.


    Posted By Terence | Feb 13, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Really cool!! Terence I love the way you did this.


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 18, 2008
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    awwwww :wub:
    Very cool! *huggles* :]

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    very cleverly done, I like the poem and the surprise :)


    Posted By BekiLynn | Feb 23, 2008
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    Terence Member

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    Thank you Anna and Beki, I am surprised at how it turned out, especially that I was able to fit in the end-rhyme.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 24, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Well done and very creative Terance, what a very lovely write! Your penmanship here lack nothing less than excellences!

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    You are very kind, Curtis, I appreciate your words very much.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 26, 2008
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