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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Jeez, Sep 2, 2006.



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    Posted By Jeez | Sep 2, 2006
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    what a poem? really this poem was great, it hada bit of sophistication, and it was very inviting and warm

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    Hello Jeez

    This seemed like a great haiku style poem. I enjoyed it. I thought about the sunshine, warm weather and summertime after reading this. Good reading about your Sun Rise.

    michael


    Posted By michael | Sep 3, 2006
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    Hi Jeez,

    Great poem, in it, alot of warmth and a feeling of nature's rays penetrating our souls with brightness and an inner voice to write this poem that you have. I appreciate simple poems like this. It says so much in few words.

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    Posted By Jeez | Sep 19, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Sep 19, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Sep 19, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    WHOA JEEZ - I was expecting something really spectacularly worded and long-read, but you've surprised with a bit of finesse... This short piece is the epitome of questioning the intent of the Maker - if you will.

    I've heard questions: "If there is a God - why is there such turmoil amongst "His" People?"

    I believe you've answered that question - And you've answered it with an astounding UMPH!

    Enjoyed this one thoroughly - Seems you didn't waste a word!
    Thanx for sharing

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 2, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 3, 2006
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    Hi Jeez!
    I like this very aptly worded riddle you have posed here. There really does seem to be a wistfulness about the days end. Can't quite agree with the answer though, since I am in no way a morning person! LOL! My eyes don't start to sparkle until sometime in the afternoon!
    Nice write! Keep posting!


    Posted By Altree94 | Oct 15, 2006
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    Tree,

    Must admit these days it
    alludes me as well,

    we won't tell anybody
    will we!!

    Thanks for your comments.


    Posted By Jeez | Oct 15, 2006
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    Just proves it is never how many words one uses, it is how they are used. Powerful work...very, very good! Thank you...


    Posted By Benny | Oct 22, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 26, 2006
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