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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by WoapPoet, Apr 30, 2012.



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    You stand grand and tall above them all

    Your golden petals extend with majesty and grace

    As the warmth of the sun reflect on your face



    My dear sweet sunflower

    I like it how you always face the sun

    No matter what happens, it’s your life’s mission



    So very much, I’d like to be like you

    Make this my life’s mission too

    Keep my eyes focused on all that’s bright

    Let my light shine, like the sun’s glowing light



    You are a happy flower

    That’s how you make us feel

    For this reason, to my heart you appeal



    It brings joy to my heart

    when I think about you

    I’m thankful for God’s wonderful world

    I’m thankful for you



    So blessed and in awe

    of all God’s beautiful creations

    The birds, the trees, the flowers, the sky

    You remind me of them all and lift my spirit high



    Thank you, dear sunflower

    For playing your part

    And shining your light inside my heart
    :bye:


    Posted By WoapPoet | Apr 30, 2012
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    What a lovely Sunflower poem,

    simple in its wording, very powerful in its message.

    Yes to look to the light, the sunlight, is truly its lesson.

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.

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    Thank you so much. I appreciate the positive comment. I'm not much of a nature poem writer, but I definitely wanted to try something different and write about my new favorite flower.


    Posted By WoapPoet | May 4, 2012
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    Well you did a great job! :)

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    pretty cool, that describes that flower very nicely,always to the sun,thanks for the share,,TMH


    Posted By tham | May 22, 2012
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