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  1. Depressed

    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Mists surround me as I walk;
    Moving with each step I take.
    The present clear, the future dim,
    While tendrils shroud the past.

    I climb the trail when crisis ends,
    The shroud lifts for a moment
    I turn around, the past is clear,
    The road, just paced, revealed.

    Misdeeds compel the road I stride,
    I smile or cringe at each step taken,
    Stay on the old, or start anew,
    A choice I must now make.

    My lifelong journey starts again,
    The surrounding mists protecting me.
    Covering steps already taken,
    Waiting to reveal what lies ahead.

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    Totally AWESOME!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 23, 2006
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    What a beautiful way of describing life's journey! Very well done, indeed! TY for posting!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 23, 2006
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  2. Depressed

    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you both for taking the time to leave a comment for this poem. I do appreciate it.
    Gail

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