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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~SWAN SONG~

    Dusk above the water
    shades the night in gray
    shadows as dragonflies
    shine their light loud
    upon lake of ripples rush
    and a sacred Cygnus
    in genteel gesture appears in
    the dark air taking
    shape in moonlit blue silhouette.

    This bird, this hour
    as beauties mirror, steals the
    night under her wing and
    drifts down the darkened rivers
    throat as shades of winter
    color her a whiter
    shade of white and she
    sings her swan song as if
    night never surrendered to dawn.

    © March 23, 2006 Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 6, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Nice, if I'm not wrong there is a song call 'swan lake'. Think I'm gonna try finding it later...


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 7, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Kaya and yes there is
    a song called Swan Lake. It's classical
    and it goes with this picture and poem
    but the board won't let me post midi's.
    I'm glad you like it :bright:):


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 7, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Ahhhhhh the calm serene words you paint compliment the images you leave us......Beautiful...Loved it!

    PD~ :)

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Hi PD and hey glad you loved it!
    :sign_thanks: so much for visiting and replying to my
    poem. Hope you're having a great day(hugs)


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 7, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Yeah, I tried searching it on youtube, it's so matching. I heard it before, it's nice, your poem and pic are nice too.


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 7, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Kaya :bass:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 7, 2007
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Beautiful and unique
    Loved the Imagery
    Keep up the good work


    Posted By deep_poet86 | Aug 7, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Moonchild, this is a peaceful song of tranquility and sets our hearts sailing upon the midnight waters...wonderful write!!

    steals the
    night under her wing and
    drifts down the darkened rivers


    I love the imagery of the verse above...such power in the swan's actions!! Thanks for posting!!

    Nomad

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much Deep Poet.
    I appreciate it :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 8, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Nomad.
    I'm glad you liked the imagery
    and I appreciate the kind words.


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    Moonchild,

    I got a late start today and I'm glad I started with your Swan Song, I got such a feeling of serenity and peace - it was a great way to start my day..... Great use of words... This is a fine piece, nice write and pic........


    Posted By lasher | Aug 8, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you so much Lasher and I'm so
    glad I filled you with some peace cause this world
    can be so unpeaceful at times. You've made
    me smile with your kind words, thank you(hugs)


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 8, 2007
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