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    BekiLynn New Member

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    skin on skin
    your mouth on my mouth -
    what more do we need?


    Posted By BekiLynn | Apr 30, 2008
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    Tha-Emissary Black Knight!

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    I'm speechless!
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    What more indeed! I read this several times, it was easy since there's not much there, word wise. But! Image wise? Hooboy! You've created an image I can't get out of my mind!

    hugs,
    Gail


    Posted By butchiesmom | May 2, 2008
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    BekiLynn New Member

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    Thank you both - I am pleased it touches you


    Posted By BekiLynn | May 5, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Beautiful imagery Beki! The poem is tiny and tight...the impact huge and wide-spreading!

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    Great lasting imagery Beki and I love the title as well. The brevity of this lil' gem, combined with the content is outstanding. It is lasting indeed!

    Kim :)

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    Oh, wow, this definitely says a lot and everything it needs to say within three short stanzas and it's very powerful even for how small it is. I really enjoyed this and I think you did a great job with it. You say a lot with so few words and I'm glad that I came across this poem and got to read it. Keep on writing!


    Posted By SarahNSH | May 6, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    A wonderful and wonderful image BIKILYNN so few words that leaves an everlast image
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 22, 2008
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