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    sableofnight New Member

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    Standing by the shore of lost dreams, I find you floating on the sea of life, quietly moving back and forth through the waves of time, looking for a place to rest, in the harbor of your soul, you hold comfort of a new love, waiting, breathing deeply the minutes of the hour.

    I watched as you slowly open the eyes of your heart to reveal the sight of true pleasure and happiness found here bound in me. Smiling I reach out a hand, intake yours in mind, familiar feelings of days gone by flood the emptiness of our souls,

    In this place, we find ourselves a new but in a longed memory we were here before.
    I waited for you to come, I prayed for you to see me standing by the shore of lost dreams.
    Though heaven might be the home of kings, I rest myself in the realm of your stilled being.

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    This is such a "longing for renewed love" type piece...waiting, hoping, remembering...lovelorn and lovesick...

    Well written prose...and I hope it has a happy ending.

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Yes, beautifully written prose. Loved you intricate weaving of words, and the longing is painted on this canvas. I too, hope for a nice ending, and if not, sounds like this place is a beautiful place to remember what once was. Loved it!

    Kim :)

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    This was Great!

    Enjoyed reading this, This has a nice flow.

    Go back and grasp the moment
    Finalize the true love you want to share
    Within ones heart

    Art

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