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    The air is hot and almost unbreathable under the bright Egyptian sun
    Here I stand in a place thousands of years old
    Anticipation enters my soul feeling like a ton
    This feeling makes my blood run cold.

    I slowly walk into the tomb as I desecrate this holy place
    Thinking of all the years a mummy laid here
    Seeing where grave robbers have been, such a waste
    Thinking of all the memories within these walls, I start to feel fear.

    Feeling as if I am being watched these feelings I must stop
    The fear and terror must dissipate
    These awful feelings I must not adopt
    I will not let my feelings seal my fate.

    Terror and horror within my soul dwells
    There is no reason for this terror I possess
    Trying to climb out of terror's deep dark well
    Scared am I, I must confess.

    I will try and take hold of my emotions
    So the fear and terror will go away
    I want to go outside and feel the warmth of the sun
    To get away from this horrid place of decay


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 27, 2006
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Good one! I could feel it as if I were there...giving me chills!
    Therese

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    I have had that feeling many times...and I always follow what I feel. In the presence of what we cannot see with our eyes, one must listen to what is whispered to their spirit. I also work at times as an amature Archeologist and have taken myself to many 'digs' at sites and just as suddenly upon my arrival turned around and came home...Great work with this presentation.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 7, 2006
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    Ok, I've cancelled my Egyptian travel plans. Very nice write.


    Posted By Storytime | Dec 9, 2006
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    Deep expressions of fear. U could feel the anxiety with each word U spoke.
    Nice job!

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Dec 10, 2006
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