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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    In the dead of Winter
    in the freshly driven snow
    there will be
    a rose in full bloom
    (that will be me)

    Out of the thunder
    dark clouds omnipotent
    lightning will strike
    a Golden Sun
    (that will be me)

    When your world
    will be in turmoil
    look toward the horizon
    a double rainbow uncoils
    (that will be me)

    Though I have passed on
    I will always love you.

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    WHOA! Very nice piece of poetry KIM - From the very 1st stanza I was already loving it - And the repetition is really some kinda genious!

    Yeah - I can relate - being the omnipotent one that I am ;)

    I love the way you've written and analogized yourself to bits of nature! The phenomena known as MS PAINTED DIARY - no?

    Very nice work!
    Thanx for sharing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 15, 2006
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    Thank you Ms Jacquii. I really liked this piece. I actually smiled after writing this. I wrote this poem, this morning, after looking at scenes of different seasons. Thank you so much, and also for taking time to read this. You are my inspiration Ms Jacquii, see what you did? LOL!!!!:girllove:

    Sebby JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    awww that is really really nice...I haven't got the vocabulary jaquii has so will just say it gave me a really warm glow inside. I love the rose in full bloom out of the snow bit. Fantastc writing as always -x-


    Posted By Sebby | Jul 15, 2006
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    Thank you so much SEBBY for taking precious time to read and comment. This is a very special poem to me. Lots of meaning. Thank you for your warm comment. Luv Ya!!

    Kim aka Painted

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    This was beautiful! A great reminder that those we love who have gone on, are not truly gone at all! When I get to thinking of my Dad and Grandmother and feeling down, re-reading this piece will give me great lift! PD - Don't ever think that your words are going unnoticed. You are doing a lot of good with pieces like this!


    Posted By Altree94 | Aug 15, 2006
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    Thank you sooo much Tree for your time in reading and commenting. I value your opinion highly and when I think of this poem, I will think of your Dad and Grandmother (along with other beautiful angels that embrace us). Luv Ya'.

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    I am thinking about sending this in to Greeting Card companies...Wish me luck! LOL!!!!!
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    If anyone know some good greeting card companies let me know. I would like to send this in. Thanks.

    ~*Painted*~ ;)

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    This rarety reflects U Kim....:bowing:
    I love the positive reinforcement of your undying presence. I agree this s/b submitted. Words of comfort to a grieving soul. :rip:

    I agree w/ Mz J- u had me @ the 1st, (that will be me)! :wave:

    Much luv,
    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Dec 20, 2006
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    Oh PD - this was so sad. Enjoyed it immensely, I'm a sucker for these romantic heart wringers.
    Beautiful penmanship, in the esoteric meaning of the adjective.
    :rainbow:
    Zvi
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    Posted By athlone | Dec 20, 2006
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    Thank you so much athlone for taking time to read and comment. Your comments keep my muse alive. Take Care.

    ~*PD*~ :wavey:

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    What a beautiful write,
    touching at a time when
    the memories of another
    need to be sealed in and
    on the mind.

    Nature as its reminder

    (that will be you).

    Thanks for the read.

    Kim.


    Posted By Jeez | Dec 21, 2006
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    Thank you so much Jeez and Ms V for taking time to read and coment. I am humbled by your reply. :blush:

    ~*Painted*~
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    Kim...A beautiful write indeed...heartfelt
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    Thank you Ms Twinks for taking time to read and comment. Tis one of my favorites. ;)

    ~*Painted*~

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    made me think about Star Wars,

    I liked the opening phrases best,
    they were very catchty,
    and it was sentimental,
    but not overly
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    Thank you Erik for taking time to read and comment. I always enjoy reading your reply, as it keeps my muse alive. Take Care my friend.

    ~*Painted*~

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    Painted.........what a fine bit of free verse poetry you have written. It is one of those poems that makes me go back and read it again......then read it one more time. I see it as a reversal of the song "I'LL BE SEEING YOU" if you get my drift. I always write in rhyme and in truth seldom find enjoyment in free verse, although this is an exception. Thank you for posting.


    Posted By Sartor | Dec 23, 2006
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    Thank you sooo much Sartor, as this is one of my favorites. I am so glad you stopped by to read and comment. Your comments mean allot, and are appreciated so much. Take Care.

    {{{{~~~~***PAINTED***~~~~}}}}

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