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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    This is another card I made titled "That Will Be Me".

    {{{~~~***Kim***~~~}}} :)

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    I wanted to make the text alittle bigger and in Calligraphy for the second.

    That Will Be Me

    In the dead of Winter
    in the freshly driven snow
    there will be
    a rose in full bloom
    (that will be me)

    Out of the thunder
    dark clouds omnipotent
    lightning will strike
    a Golden Sun
    (that will be me)

    When your world
    will be in turmoil
    look toward the horizon
    a double rainbow uncoils
    (that will be me)

    Though I have passed on
    I will always love you.

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    Kim:

    Applause!! Applause!! Applause!!!

    Yes indeed it will be you.

    "It Will Be Me" The poem itself was immaculate. Then with the pic. it was totally breathtaking!!

    I really loved the text on the 2nd pic. It was so perfect!

    It is a wonderful re-read for sure.

    Loved it.

    Blessings

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    Congrats on your great
    works being published.

    The second card looks
    to be better with the
    larger and more stylish
    fonts.

    The picture is beautiful
    how it looks as if it's got
    wings in the sky.

    Great all round.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | Jul 28, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    This is good, you're getting better, maybe I should do one some day..
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 29, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Thank you soooo much all of you for taking precious time to read and to comment. I am most grateful.

    Thank you sooo much Sally, and Jeez...yes, the 2nd is the winner, lolol. The cloud is a cloud angel with wings.

    Thank you Ms Jeez about the publications, it is a new experience for me.

    LOL Kyanta...getting better? I have done a ton of these. Thanks for stopping by, glad you enjoyed.

    Kim :)

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    This is sad and happy at the same time. I don't know whether to cry or be inspired.
    It's fitting to someone who has lost a loved one. Reminders are painful, yet needed like floweres on a grave. It's very beautiful.


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 29, 2007
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    Wow, cool, maybe you can be a card seller someday. Be sure to give 100% discount to JPiCians.. hahaz, jkjk
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 30, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    ROFL - JPiC's gotta get the credit :lol: But really KIM!!!!!!!!!!! I remember this poem very well - the 1st stanza was just off the crazy chain hype!

    Such beautiful imagery! Vivid imagery actually - and the cards are quite lovely!
    Thanx for the sharing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 30, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Kim, the card is totally breathtaking...like getting that ooomph in your stomach...takes your breath away - I could start at it for hours. AND the poem, well. I remember that one quite well and it's one of my favorite...promises of long lasting love and devotion, and the surety of having someone BE there...there is nothing better that knowing that. Like Ms. J, my very favorite is the first stanza...it bursts upon the reader like the sunrise does to brighten the cool dawn - surprise!

    Awesome work!!
    Nomad
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    Thank you so much Jolie, Therese, Sally Kaya, Jeez and Ms Jacquii for taking time to read and to comment. This is one of my favorites of all and it can take the mind so many places. I really appreciate all the kind words and I am grateful. Love ya!

    Kim :)
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    Dear Kim: WOW!! I am so impressed!! What a lovely masterpiece, sweetheart!! It adds up to so many that you have written, dear. I am so glad to have stopped by and read your wonderful words of devotional inspirations. It is a breathtaking one, not only the poem, but also the graphics!! Thank you for sharing it with us, sweet Kim!! (((Hugs and Love Always))) Fondly, Starry.:angel: :angel:


    Posted By stardust | Aug 11, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Kim,

    this one leaves me speechless. imagaine that! I just know that I'm going to go down to Wal-mart or some other card section and find you masterpieces staring at me. My Fav:

    Stunning imagery!

    Jerry
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    Dear Therese, Ms Starry, and Jerry,

    Thank you so much for taking precious time to read, view and comment. Your comments are beautiful and have left me speechless and misty. Don't know what I would do without you guys, Ms Jacquii and JPiC. Thank you so much. I am most grateful. Love you guys....

    Kim :wub:

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