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    raw attraction
    chain reaction
    sequence of events...
    meeting by chance
    mating dance
    sex has many scents...
    call of the wild
    by the beguiled
    copulation taking place...
    you know the source
    intercourse
    supplies the human race...
    some hard and fast
    some slow, to last
    it depends on your flavor...
    no matter how
    its always "wow"
    when finished and you savor...
    the thrills that were
    for him and her
    as nails scratch across backs...
    to feel insane
    and to drain
    upon the act's climax..
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    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 7, 2007
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Serious good stuff there Scott. you do this well and in others I have seen without going into x-rating. Well done.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jul 7, 2007
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    Checkmate Member

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    thanks mike...i know most people don't enjoy smut, but when it is worded right it is a different story...as always, i appreciate the comments...thanks aagin


    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 8, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    I like it... nice rhyming... easy to read...


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 8, 2007
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    ~Serenity~ ~Pixie Princess~

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    Hey Checkmate! Neat write =) I love the quick + short lines, and the rhyme scheme too. Keep'em coming!

    Smiles!,
    ~Serenity~


    Posted By ~Serenity~ | Jul 26, 2007
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