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    I was so excited when I got the call
    That I was going to meet some one new
    I have to wonder to myself is he tall?
    Wonder if he is good looking too?

    I wanted everything to be just right
    My friend told me to wear black wonder why?
    And why were we leaving so late at night?
    I guess I'm going to meet a strange kind of guy.

    Makeup just right, dress black as coal
    I was ready to embark on my little adventure
    Little did I know I would end up trying to protect my soul
    It was cold I even wore a fur.

    We met each other in front of a bar
    He was tall, dark, and in an inhuman way, he was handsome
    We then headed for his car
    All of a sudden I went numb.

    "Look into my eyes, my darling girl"
    And as he seemed he was going to kiss me
    Everything started to twirl
    What happened next? You tell me.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 3, 2007
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    Dear Lanaia,

    This was a fascinating tale, woven in black thread. I loved this, and will be back.

    {{~~**Kimberly**~~}}
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    Dear Lanaia,

    "Look into my eyes, my darling girl"
    And as he seemed he was going to kiss me
    Everything started to twirl
    The kiss of death tasted bittersweet.

    {{~~**Painted**~~}}

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