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    Wind WindXSaul

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    The Border Heart

    Today i realized what you had done,You yourself not even knowing that you broke what was in important to me.Should i tell you is the best question.I mean how could you break down the wall i put around my heart to be close to me? It make me almost hate you i never thought the walls would start crumbling down.When did it start why didn't it come closer?I can't give up on this not when i was so close to closing up into the hole my demon dug for me. I would be thanking that demon but you shined so bright like the sun that the cold started to hurt me and i climbed out to be near you.But now i feel hurt cause i feel foolish.You never set a trap,but i can't wait to go back in to the dark where i can't be hurt. But once you find the light how do you go back into the dark?


    Posted By Wind | Mar 24, 2012
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    the light is always better than the dark, always.


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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Interesting comment. I've always thought of light being equal to dark. 50/50
    Just sometimes the more vocal of the "dark" is louder than the indifference of the "light" -- Kind of literal... Okay - I was beginning to ramble lol. Interesting comment though :)

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 25, 2012
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    tham Member

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    along the lines of good vs evil, when I think of some one being in the dark, it just reminds me of when I was in my dark days,nothing good came out of it,


    Posted By tham | Mar 25, 2012
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