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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    The Firefly Lights

    These things
    We seek sweetly
    Are hidden;Quite nicely
    Even. Ashes on the brink of
    Fire. Fly.

    Copyright © 2012 Jacquii Cooke
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    Thought I'd try my hand at the cinquain again... Find more info regarding the robust, quick and fun form cinquain at http://jpicforum.info/threads/cinquain.666/ ---- Come share yours in the thread Cinquain...Anyone? :yes:

    Hope you enjoyed my very spontaneous write!

    J.
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 28, 2012
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    Brilliant write my sisstar. The way you word this discernment is superb in my eyes...

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    Posted By LE00EL | Oct 31, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Well thank you very much! I've been going through writers block for the past year and a half it seems. So trying to get back into the swing of things. And what better way thank starting with traditional short forms right? Anyway - thanks - I appreciate the poetic love ;)

    J.


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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    love the last two lines...

    Dead ashes and vigorous burning fire,
    foes or friends yet both conjoined together
    and what I seek sweetly,
    have you been hidiing the same quitely,
    answer me...


    Posted By JONATHAN | Nov 5, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Nice to know this piece inspired a bit of creativity within you JONATHAN --- And my answer...?

    Hidden indeed, this majestic life.
    Crown on your head, shining bright:
    A flame to be sure. You are my Phoenix.
    Tall, up-standing my phoenix light.
    And conjoined though we may be:
    Flame-shine that I may find my way into
    your burning desire. This answer
    my love: burns on the alter
    of our love-enflamed nuptial pyre.

    We should collab one good day my friend. I think we'd vybe off of each other, as if some orgasm and a half :snog:
    We may need to stamp the collaboration with Not Safe For Work LMAO :joke:
    Anyway - Thanks for the poetic love. I'm glad you liked this piece enough that it inspired you to the beautiful post above.

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 6, 2012
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    I love this peice, it was a pleasure reading it and commenting ..yes we should collab and come up with something down and dirty soon . Love ya Ms J!
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    Posted By JONATHAN | Nov 7, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Love ya right back! And I don't know about down and dirty as much as love-soaked and sweaty LOL
    We should collab though - Vybing off each other would be sweet I'm sure!:hello1:


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 9, 2012
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