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    a collection of my idiocy lays before me
    i pluck the negative consequences
    and resume my chaotic reality.
    which mistake will i perform?
    which of the many foiled attempts to conform
    must i ponder on?
    yes, glare at that mischief maker
    bringing about thier own spoiled fate,
    laugh at the foolish undertaker
    who learns the lesson much too late.
    kiss the lips of the clown who reaps its own woe
    slap the painted face as friend and foe.
    dance the dance of pity for this simplistic evil
    i am evil for little or more reason
    than ignorance.

    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I like this very much, read it a couple times.

    I think we all play that part sometimes in our lives.


    Posted By JolieH | May 2, 2008
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    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    nice poem

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    thank you all :)

    zaac Banned

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    this is amazing work. i havent seen someone that penned in as close a fashion before, as I used to. This is very multi layered with metaphors that are whimsical and quizzical at the same time. And the strength of the piece is the strength of the emotion behind it.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | May 24, 2008
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