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    inspir888 Cindy

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    Beauty can create inspiration.

    It can open doors of intimidation.

    As a candle that effortlessly stirs a glow.

    Some think it is merely a physical show.

    For others, it is all they know.

    We are drawn into its warming persuasion,

    To only conform recklessly without a warning.

    Although we know nothing of where it comes,

    We find it as a promised cause;

    It is the reason why we dance,

    And why we take a second chance.

    So much beauty can fill a heart’s desire,

    And leave it empty at winter’s unending ecclesiastical attire.

    It is in the feeling

    It is without meaning…

    This is the strange and funny understanding,

    That leaves me speechless and uncomprehending….

    By Cindy Piazza-Ivy


    Posted By inspir888 | Feb 11, 2008
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    Terence Member

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    Welcome Cindy, a thought provoking poem, and I love your ending as, when it comes to people, I am in agreement with
    "It is in the feeling
    It is without meaning…"

    Of course, with art, poetry, etc. it is in the feeling ... but that's another topic.

    Thanks for posting, I look forward to more.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 11, 2008
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    inspir888 Cindy

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    Thank you for the reply Terrance. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This actually took a different course all of its own as I was writing it. I think I surprised myself with it!

    I hope you have a wonderful evening.

    Cindy


    Posted By inspir888 | Feb 11, 2008
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