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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    The Hawk The moon and The maiden
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    The moon is a brilliant Ivory orb
    Sitting high in the black silken sky
    Bathing her in whispers of moonlight
    As trillions of stars flickering radiantly

    ~

    A shadowy silhouette floats into the moon
    She gazes skyward looking for the shadow
    A lonely figure circles in the silky sky
    Too obscure to see all the details
    Except for it’s majestic wings and tail

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    Yet close enough to see the beauty
    Of the magnificent hawk soaring
    Through the heavens, circling the ivory moon
    Her soul soars with the Hawk
    Her kindred spirit

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    Together once again sailing on
    The cool refreshing summer breeze
    Three spirits becoming one
    The Hawk, The Moon and The Maiden


    Posted By Bear | Aug 12, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Bear
    This is so pretty - a lovely spiritual poem. The setting is dark and scary, yet the images of moonlight give sight in the dark. The hawk is watching over from heights; the wing is protective, like to take something under your wing. To me this poem is very much about freedom.

    added later: The theme in this reminds me a little of the song: "I'll Follow you into the dark."
    Here's a link to the lyrics.
    DEATH CAB FOR CUTIE LYRICS - I Will Follow You Into The Dark


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 12, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jolie for your great comments this was written for a very good friend in Ireland I was inspired to write this for her one day when she left me a comment on another poem.
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 12, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Honey Bear:

    You sure know how to get this reader's attention.
    So pure the hawk soars through the night. It reminds me of the ancient ones. The Mother, Maiden and Crone.( The Moon Goddess's)

    Thanks for sharing!
    Blessings

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Bear,

    Once again, you use nature as your dictionary to give us a pleasurable experience with words. My Fav:

    Jerry
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    Dear Bear,

    :wow: The way you paint nature is phenomenal, and places one there. So soothing, tranquil, and thank you forthe journey. Loved it!

    Kim :wub:

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so very much for the wonderful comments Sally, Jerry, and Painted Nature is one of my true loves and if I can get you to feel as if you are there then I have painted a masterpiece.
    Handshakes and hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 24, 2007
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