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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    Brother Wind is calling calling
    Whispering within the air
    Caressing fingers on our flesh
    Flowing secrets in our hair

    Mother Earth is humming humming
    Crooning out a lullaby
    As all her creatures wander home
    To comforting waiting arms we lie

    Sister Water singing singing
    Sweet sweet songs of ice and snow
    Pushing us to wander onward
    To her fiery Father's glow.

    Father Fire flickers flickers
    Welcoming with merry laughter
    Joining us in celebration
    Lulling us to sleep hereafter.

    Father, Mother, Sister, Brother
    In their favor we find peace.
    Now's the time when love and laughter
    Come together in all beasts.

    Join us now at the hearth
    And listen to the tales we spin.
    Drink our mead and eat our dinners
    For soon our Spring will come again.


    Posted By Sealiah | Nov 2, 2007
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    Terence Member

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    "Spirit sleeps in the mineral breathes in the vegetable dreams in the animal and wakes in man." as their saying goes.

    Fine poem, Sealiah. Flows very nicely, good rhyme, and it captures the spirit of the Druid New Year well.

    Thank you for a good read, Terence


    Posted By Terence | Nov 2, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    I love the rhyming on this! :D It was a really awesome poem ^.^ The theme was unique, at least to me. I don't often read poems like this =D


    Posted By Aumakua | Nov 3, 2007
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    BekiLynn New Member

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    well said, your repetition works well and the poem flowed very nicely.


    Posted By BekiLynn | Nov 11, 2007
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