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    Calling all detectives,
    A murder with no clue,
    The floor filled with dead souls.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 2, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    nice one xMex :]

    The cacophony-
    crashing, screeching, screaming, beeping
    fill the smog-filled air

    Quiet despairing
    flows into the empty sky
    one single wail.
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    Spell of the Onyx
    dark night of the soul screaming
    black tears at midnight.
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    time sat quietly
    not concerned with you or me
    as death crawled away

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    Sitting in a bus, once again
    Reading through a book,
    Not remembering a word.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 16, 2007
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    Hi Me...this is one of those Haiku-types...so first line 5 syllables, second line 7, and third line 5 again.

    Nomad

    He who loves and laughs
    Will always attain haiku
    Sit on mountain top

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    Grrr. sorry, we did these other kind of poems at school and they got stuck in my head XD


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 16, 2007
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    Reverberating
    madness enveloped my soul.
    Now: lonely sunflo'er.

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    JAAAAAAAAAAAAC...........WOW.......that yellow font I can hardly read: Hurts my eyes!

    Written in yellow
    Elegant poetic bliss
    Toned low and mellow


    Posted By Sartor | Mar 20, 2007
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    LOL SARTOR - I changed it to gold - but it is a bit of madness :p didn't you read it LOL
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    golden silhouette
    satiates the poetic mind:
    a di'mond-hued sun
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    as anger rages
    around a sublime table
    eruptions ensue

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    Breathing, relaxing
    in the arms of the loved one
    brings eternal peace

    A lonely girl asks
    "When is it time to become?"
    And no one answers
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    Great Ku's and Hokku's everyone!!! Let's keep this going!!!!!!!!

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    Eyes, unblinking stare
    entranced, unsuspecting hare
    struck dead, unaware


    Posted By Sartor | May 12, 2007
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    :wow: So dark - so lovely
    Very nice writings EVERYONE
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    quarter-moon sliver
    mystique and reverence aglow
    love is there: Venus.

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    Ahhhhhh Ms Jacquii......so beautiful...you must have wrote this for me!! LOLOL :p
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    uh... yeah... whatever... :twitcy:
    Glad you likes - YAY!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 1, 2007
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    Burning Aching Pain
    Sunburn is a sin on skin
    Wrath from the Sky

    Eh. I'm bad with the emotions thing so err. Yeah. Stupid beach. My back hurrtsss
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    Posted By Aste | Jul 13, 2007
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    War machines gone mad
    Hedge rows in lamentation
    Soothsayers mutter

    Young girls are lonely
    As soldiers fly flags enough
    To fill a foreign sky

    After the parade
    Only shadows share his tears
    His boy gone to war

    Though dilapidated
    You whose names written in blood
    Fly your flags with courage


    Posted By Visionary | Jul 16, 2007
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    Night sky, with pinpricked holes,
    letting heaven's light shine through.
    Dots of light - called stars.


    Posted By Altree94 | Mar 3, 2008
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