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    Wind WindXSaul

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    The Human,The Demon, And The Angel

    I'm the one who must stay
    I'm the one who must kill you
    I'm the one who must reverse time

    I am to die when the new moon is in range
    I am the one to be your executioner your taker of life
    I am to observer and to take note of everything and of every life


    Who are you to say I have no future
    I say what I please for I am the bringer of death
    I want to help I wish to free you I need to save you

    There is no more time for my life
    You never had a life to begin with
    She was free until you stole her very being

    I am the human who must die
    I am the demon who only wants her body for it kill
    I am the angel who will take her soul once her body is gone

    We are in one body
    We are in one mind
    We are three trapped by one bond

    These times are different then the last
    These times are different then when I was young
    These times are different then when the earth was made

    Oh how we let this control us
    Oh how we take our worlds and live for such granted
    Oh how we let who we are put fear in our hearts


    I leave this to you
    I leave this to you
    I leave this to you

    We have exceed
    We have flown
    We have drowned
    We have died
    We have lived
    We have made many wonders
    We have created a new life
    We have done evil deeds
    We have done good deeds
    We have but to wait for the one day
    We have but to wait for our freedom
    We have each other
    We have nothing but that
    We have nothing but each other and to wait
    We have to wait for freedom


    Posted By Wind | Jul 11, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Interesting piece Wind - this reads as if a bi-polar feast of whoa! These three beings (the demon, the angel, the human) struggling to simply be, to exist. Perhaps a curse, they are under...? But still the want of freedom shines through even the darkest of curses. I find that conceptually this poem is about striding through the murk which God has given you and making the best of it = turning lemons to lemonade so to say. I feel this piece offers a testimony which is both empowering and inspired.

    Thanks for the share.

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Sep 14, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    all I can say is WOW .... will try to formulate something more after a few more reads of this work Wind.


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 6, 2012
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