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    Oh beware of the Jabberwock, behind the Tumtum tree,
    he lies in wait of Knights who walk and look but do not see.
    He hears them as they idly talk of heros they would be!

    He smiles as they slowly stalk the cunning Jabberwock.
    Then he will pounce quick as a hawk, the knights will only gawk,
    He’ll eat them up so they’ll not mock the cunning Jabberwock!

    So if you would go a’walking, avoid the Tumtum tree.
    Because there he lies a’stalking and there will ever be,
    a cunning hungry Jabberwock, behind the Tumtum tree!


    Posted By Storytime | Dec 10, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    nice poem more of afable like you desire it seems cool pic to go along with it too, your poem had a good tone and could let the imagine reallt run wild
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    I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reminds me of my poll question of Childhood Pleasures....Thank you for sharing! Love the image also,,is a nice compliment and adds to the visual.

    Painted ;)

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