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    Hiding secrets, displaying attraction
    sweet curving half moons of desire
    a blowing kiss lifts many hearts
    even those for which it wasn't intended
    encouraging many quiet grins
    or quickening, spiraling joy
    with a slowly taunting upturned smile
    full and lusciously calling
    to the opposite sex just ripe for mating
    quivering shyly, blooming awareness
    of power and honey-dipped sweetness
    promising so many things

    © therese young

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    I thought this had good thoughts and was very good,
    especially the last two verse were awesoem
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks for reading and commenting, Erik!!

    Nomad

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    i loved it :]


    although...i've never experienced a kiss...


    haha but now i want one :]
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Not even a blown one? hey, that counts! here ya go....:kiss3:

    :girlkiss: :girl-LOL:


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    yay *huggles*

    haha, fine, i haven't given a true true kiss :]

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    Yeah...seduction in purist form. The lips are the most sensual tool the human has and are the most focused upon as it is easily seen and easily gives away the thoughts behind one's eyes. There is so much sensuality in this work that I do not know where to begin. Is it ok if I simply nod my head and grin?


    Posted By Benny | Mar 4, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    nodding....and...grinning!! hehe!

    glad u liked it, Benny!!


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    This was great, Nomad! Loved it!
    Lips are good for a lot more than talking! LOL!
    :kiss2:
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Mar 16, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks so much, Tree, for reading this one. Glad you liked!!

    Nomad
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    Dear Nomad,

    These are my favorite lines!! Loved It!!!!! Yes, the lips are very sensual, strong, part of the language of body language in my opinion, sensitive, and etc. I loved the concept of this piece, as I have not seen too many poems about "Lips". One of the best uses for "Lips" is getting or giving that first "I Love You" kiss. Wooohooo!!!! Ok, got carried away!Scrumpshalicious!!!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}
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    Oh Yes! I could have gone on and on with this one, but broke it up into good and bad, but Tree didn't like my "ugly lips" version, "The Lips II" not that I blame her! haha! It wasn't my favorite either. But life is pervasive, isn't it? Especially in poetry. Lips have always fascinated me...and eyes!! wow! Thanks again, PD!!

    Nomad

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