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    THE LOVE AFFAIR OF THE MOON & THE SEA
    Mystically with all her beauty
    The moon captivated the yearning sea
    Alluring as she was
    He fell in love with her
    She controlled his every ebb and flow
    He ached day after day
    Only to touch her...
    His sorrowful waves
    Destined to crash upon the shore
    In all his misery
    Until one day the beautiful moon
    Shined down on him
    Touching every drop that he was made of
    Soothing as she was
    He no longer felt pain and grief
    His heart was filled with love
    She made him complete
    And so began the love affair of
    The moon and the sea
    ┬ędp

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    Hey now PG,

    It's good to read you again - as usual, you did not disappoint....
    This write (little story) is chock full 'o pleasant imagery - beautiful visuals......
    I enjoyed mucho...............


    Posted By lasher | Oct 20, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I can see the reflection of the moon cast on the ocean's rippled surface. It's just beautiful. I like personified poems. This is very sweet.


    Posted By JolieH | Oct 20, 2007
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    Thank you Lasher and Jolie H for reading my poetry...and you are right Lasher I have been away way too long. I'm so happy you both like this, it's one of my favorites.
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    PG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where have you been dahling? I needed my PG fix and got it, lol! This was scrumpshalicious as usual. Beautiful, full of paintings within this canvas and all done with barest minimum of space. That is masterful writing.

    Touching every drop that he was made of

    Oh how beautiful.......just :wow: Please don't stay away too long. Love ya!

    PD ;)

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