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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "The Modern Girl Next Door"

    It used to be when meeting gals
    The parts were all their own,
    With smooth round breasts
    And long silk legs
    And real - right to the bone.

    With teeth so pearly white and clean
    And hair that needs no comb,
    The perfect gal
    So proud to share
    A prize to take her home.

    One day I'd found my own true love
    And said my wedding vow,
    My heart did beat
    Right through my chest
    I knew I'd get it now.

    The honeymoon was really grand
    But then we dressed for bed,
    My eyes popped out
    I had to stare
    And nearly fell down dead.

    She took a wig from top her crown
    Which left a bald spot there,
    Her baby blues
    Were contacts too.
    She set them down with care.

    Some teeth came next which left a gap
    A truck could drive right through,
    I could not believe
    That what I saw
    Was really, really true.

    And then she took her make- up off
    Her face went with it too,
    And what I spied
    When I turned 'round....
    The vision's up to you.


    Sally aka Forestdawn

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    Gawd! I laughed so hard reading this poem...funny to the core...just as life is and the plastic people we can meet...this was worth the read!


    Posted By Benny | Nov 23, 2006
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks Benny:

    I had fun with this one. Noticing all the women, as well as men having things done to thier bodies to make them look younger.
    Sometimes we have to pick fun at their antics, yet in reality the business within this society needing the changes are surreal, and as well being humorous.

    Blessed be
    Sally aka Forestdawn

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