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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    She wore black.
    Barely!
    The satin-white finish of her skin glistened under the lamp-light.
    Her pert breasts jutted up before overflowing the thin outline of her laced top.
    Her eyes were opal black, obscure, encased in pearl white orbs
    that beckoned me to submit to her demand,
    “Come taste the honey of my

    Midnight Rose.


    This was written for a 55 word only contest with a prompt of "Midnight Rose"

    This is my darker side I don't normally go here!

    :russian_ru:

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    Mm... now that does sound delish...

    Uh...

    Wait. I didn't say it. I meant... Bad Jer! Who'd've thought you to have a dark side... and then, to unleash those vivid images and tempting thoughts on us poor unsuspecting JPiCans like that.... Hm. This isn't working.

    I love it!

    Smiles!,
    ~Serenity~


    Posted By ~Serenity~ | Aug 30, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ooh steamy..... dang I need a shower ..... to cool me off lol. Awesome write Jer.

    *hugs*

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 30, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    :wow: Jer...you sure took off there! Very sexy, and salacious write here...might get some people a little hot under the collar! haha! I absolutely love it!

    Her eyes were opal black, obscure, encased in pearl white orbs

    what imagery!! :yay:

    Nomad

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Thanks.....uhhhh all women responding.....I need the shower....bye!

    And Therese you know my story..


    Jerry

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    Jer...........excellent descriptive lines that let the mind enjoy a visual delight. I could almost taste the honey.


    Posted By Sartor | Aug 31, 2007
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    Jerry.....I could almost taste the honey and I only like honey with tea! lolol......Not to mention what would have happened if you had another 55 words....omg......lololol...just teasin'...LOVED THIS and GREAT write!!

    Kim ;)

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Ya'll too nice. Thanks for your kind words!

    Jerry


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Sep 1, 2007
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    don't worry about going there normally...i do on a regular basis, so i'll stand in for you from now on. lol was a cool piece with some nice imagery

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Sep 6, 2007
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    Jerry you fiery hot sensual beautifully written
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Sep 6, 2007
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