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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    The Tranquility of the Forest
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    I desire to be in the forest
    A place that’s so serene and tranquil
    To be Alone with Mother Nature
    To observe the Maker of our world
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    I yearn to withdraw from the city
    A place polluted with the a tense nervous energy
    And living a life with the cities frenzied velocity
    That’s ravaging the quintessence out of me
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    I crave to be quickly transported
    Going on a journey back in time
    To a unostentatious life
    With a slower, simpler existence
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    I long to be in the forest
    Gathering new energy from the wilderness
    Rejuvenating my anguished heart
    Letting my soul soar in the lofty tangerine sky like an eagle
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    I wish to be in the presence of Mother Earth
    Hearing her gentle voice calling me
    Hearing the call of the majestic eagle
    Listening to the "ancient ones"whispering in the breeze
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    I’m in the solace of the colorful forest
    Beneath the canopy of a picturesque sky
    Where my heart and soul are at peace
    And my spirit can soar the mountaintops with an eagle


    Posted By Bear | May 5, 2008
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    reasonrhymer New Member

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    I be out there flying with you. Nice one, I could feel the emoting of emotion in this.

    A cool breeze.

    RR

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much for the great comment and for stopping by to read my poem Ill see you in the heavens circling around and drifting on the cool breeze
    handshakes reasonrhymer
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 10, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Incredible Bear,
    you've penned such a beautiful escape.


    Posted By JolieH | May 13, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jolie for this incredible comment and thank you for reading my poems
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 13, 2008
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    I feel the tranquility just reading this!

    I've felt the same yearning, but have come to the realization that even though it looks like a tranquil time then, it had it's own problem.

    I read this and thought of when I was in my hammock last summer and heard the same whispers!

    Beautiful poem, as usual.

    hugs,
    Gail

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    Gail thank you for this great and wonderful comment its nice to know there is someone else that felt what I wrote
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 14, 2008
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