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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by tham, Mar 21, 2012.



    tham Member

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    Have you looked upon
    the yesterday,
    of dreams that fell apart
    have you gazed out on
    the moon lit sky,
    and wonder will I start?
    is it too late, really too late
    to start afresh and new,
    are you asking yourself
    just one question,
    what do I have to do?
    TMH 1/31/2012


    Posted By tham | Mar 21, 2012
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    very nice poem, deeply reflective, thanks

    tham Member

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    thank you glad you liked it


    Posted By tham | Mar 23, 2012
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    oh my gosh ....that a question people should ask more and think of yesterdayas today and tomorrow as today


    Posted By Wind | Mar 24, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    A nice short write Tham! Reminds me of a trio of pieces I started which shined light on "yesterday, yesteryear and the now"-- yes indeed - deeply reflective as Morning Star stated. A pensive piece which makes ya go, "hmmmm - I wonder..."

    Nice piece. Thanks for the sharing :yes:

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 25, 2012
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    Hi there, Tham;
    I too have had my share of unrealized dreams, but one keeps on going. That's life, and I can only echo your pensive words. A short but effective poem. Glad I had a chance to read it.

    Jerry


    Posted By JerryK | Mar 26, 2012
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    tham Member

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    thanks to all who shared


    Posted By tham | Mar 27, 2012
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