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    "THIRST QUENCHER." (Love Song-Lyrics/ Poem). Author: Stardust. (Written 3-22-2007).

    Let me love you one more time!!
    Let me take you to Fairyland!!
    Let me show you my love for you!!
    I´ll love you...
    ´Till the end of times.

    You dwell inside my heart,
    A place from where you´ll never part.
    I´ll quench all your emotions
    With sensations beyond proportions.

    I know, you won´t ever quench
    The volcanoe living in me.
    I know, you will resist,
    And I wouldn´t ever insist...

    REFRAIN:
    I´ll quench -if you want- all your thirst for love,
    I´m your love-thirst quencher from above,
    Your water fountain of life
    Will be filled to the brim.
    I´m thirsty of your love!!...
    You´ll never ask for more!!...

    Author: Starry. (This is a Love Song-Lyrics/ Poem dedicated to my fellowman).:scores:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 7, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Lovely love song Starry:

    I really loved this one hon.

    Thank you very much for sharing.

    Blessings
  2. Angelic

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    Dear Sally: Thank you so much, sweet Sally, for your kind appraisal and comments over my little poem/song!! I always like to see other poets reading my work. It gives me some kind of encouragement to keep on writing. You see, this one was a challenge...My mate told me that, I was unable to write Love Songs or Love Poems. So, this little poem was born then...I think, I can write anything, if I really wanted to...Thank you again, sweet Sally, for reading my work and sharing your comments with me!! I must go to your poems and read them, one of these days...You see, I am too tired lately. I just can´t do too many things at the same time. I am still so busy taking care of my 2 sick elderly Aunts, and that kind of responsible job prevents me from doing what I love the most: WRITING WITH A PASSION. Well, I´ll see you soon...Take care, honey!! (((HUGS))) Starry.:kiss2:


    Posted By stardust | Jun 3, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    You are very welcome starry :)

    I understand how it is to take care of ill relatives and such. I too had my share of helping with family.

    It is rewarding and very tiring as well. And it takes up most of one's personal time. So I am very happy you had a liitle respite to write.

    Thanks again hon . I loved your song/poem :)

    Blessings
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    Dear Sally: WOW!!...I feel so honoured and impressed, when I see you reading and making your wise appraisals over my little work. Thank you, honey, for writing to me!! I certainly appreciate your kindness. YES!! I know..., how it feels to do many things at the same time. However, I can NEVER STOP WRITING with a passion, since it is my only love...At times, I do it more often than others. But, I´ll always do it, unless I am dead...Well, I would like to read some of your poems. I am sure, I´ll soon do it. I must find a quiet minute and relax myself, in order to enjoy your wonderful Poetry. (((HUGS))) Sincerely, Starry.:word_hello: :word_hello:


    Posted By stardust | Jun 4, 2007
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Dear sweet friend, TREE:
    I send you another one for you to review. It is just the lyrics, no music. I would love this one to become a REAL SONG WITH MUSIC ON...What do you say, dear TREE??
    (((Hugs and Love))) Starry.:drinks::thumbsup:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 17, 2007
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