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    Jims Inn Jims Inn

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    So upon the return of the sky people
    When the stars have fallen from heaven
    And the gods dance in circles.
    The age of enchantment will begin
    With a purpose, a promise and a prophecy.

    Sky people will enter the kingdom of light
    Thru the gate of the sun
    Walking on both sides of the street.

    Sons of thunder will enter the temple of stars
    Bathed in the changing light
    Of the moon.

    Men of the earth will enter the isle of dead
    In a shower off stars
    Like visitors.


    Posted By Jims Inn | Jan 25, 2008
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    Mohammad Ilyas New Member

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    A nice imagery.

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Creative imagery.
    I really enjoyed this one, thanks!


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 26, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I agree,
    Interesting imagery, a promise of enchantment indeed.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 30, 2008
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    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    oooooh! Please, please tell me this is a prophecy and a story is building behind this! Wow!
    Gail

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