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    Through All Seasons

    if the skies opened wide
    rains pouring down
    upon my weary spirit ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    drying the tears of rain...

    if the sun was beating
    down upon me
    scorching my skin ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    shading the heat of grief...

    if my heart was full
    of despair and panic
    filling me with anxiety ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    comforting my loss of you...

    if each season
    brought a memory of you
    to my sensitive heart & mind ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    living in light and love
    through the sentiments
    of my soul...

    by dolores1961

    written june 30, 2000


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 6, 2006
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ok, I know this is the net and sometimes you can misinterpret things people say but I'm dead serious when I say this poem was simply astonishing to me....you have a very unique style here and the way you wrote this poem was like none other, it's like a love poem that seems like a before and after type thing like when you said

    if the skies opened wide
    rains pouring down
    upon my weary spirit ~


    It's like this is what happened before you met this person and then you say

    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    drying the tears of rain...


    And that is like after you met this person and the fact that whether they are there or not they still have this really big impact in your life that is enough to take your troubles away; Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 6, 2006
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    dolores1961 New Member

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    :thanx: dear friend...
    thank you so much for your positive affirmation on my poem...and also for digging deeper into it and "feeling" it....that is what i hope my poetry will do...i introduced myself in the new members forum too :acute: hope to be able to post more...and read others' poems, too :blablabla:

    hope to get to know many of you! it is always awesome to be on a forum with creative people!! it is an inspiring experience!

    oh, the poem was written in memory of my father who passed away in april 2000...but it could be taken in different context...that is one of the things i love about poetry: each person delves into it and reaches their own story or experience into it...

    love...
    dolores...a new friend


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 6, 2006
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    No problem about this and I never really specified who you were talking to I jus felt it was somebody that was and prolly still is significant in your life even through death.....


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 6, 2006
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    i just thank you for reading the poem and giving such positive feedback! :sign_thanks:

    sincerely...
    dolores


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 7, 2006
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    No problem


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