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    dolores1961 New Member

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    through all seasons

    if the skies opened wide
    rains pouring down
    upon my weary spirit ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    drying the tears of rain...

    if the sun was beating
    down upon me
    scorching my skin ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    shading the heat of grief...

    if my heart was full
    of despair and panic
    filling me with anxiety ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    comforting my loss of you...

    if each season
    brought a memory of you
    to my sensitive heart & mind ~
    i should always feel
    your spirit next to me
    living in light and love
    through the sentiments
    of my soul...

    by dolores1961

    written june 30, 2000


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 6, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    Wonderful write! Very expressive and the imagery is heart felt...sad, yet moving forward...beautiful work.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 6, 2006
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    dolores1961 New Member

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    hello benny!
    thanks so very much for the positive feedback on my poem...it was written in memory of my father who passed away april, 2000...it is very special to me...also i love to use imagery in poetry, if it is possible! :tybow: hope to get to make friends here too...

    sincerely...
    dolores


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 6, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    this poem was spectacular delores

    dolores1961 New Member

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    dear friend...
    i am honored with the positive affirmation on my 1st poem on this forum! thanks so much! hope to be able to post more and read others' poems, too...

    love..
    dolores:omg:


    Posted By dolores1961 | Dec 6, 2006
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