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    Tu Yingyi New Member

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    Hi, everyone! This is a poem written in my earlier years. I'd like to see where I can improve it.


    Time and Tide

    --- By Tu Yingyi

    Time travels in haste,
    Tide sings in ebb and flow.
    Clock goes round apace,
    To memory my heart ticks slow.

    Hours passed, your face unaware,
    Stories set sail on a silvery night.
    Minutes elapsed, a gaze endeared,
    Smiles bloomed on whispers spreading wide.

    Seconds froze, a heartbeat missed,
    In your eyes loomed the lost angel.
    The moment I received your kiss,
    A duet crescendoed off from a solo.

    Time and tide waits,
    For the ebb to subside;
    Time and tide waits,
    For the flow to rise.


    Posted By Tu Yingyi | Jan 24, 2008
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    I have throughly enjoyed your poem Tu! It is indeed one the most beautyful ones I have ever read! I thank you for sharing this beautyful work!

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