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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Benny, Jan 4, 2007.



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    Opague drops of love's pained sorrow
    visit this moonless night to dance,
    yet my heart shall laugh tomorrow
    thankful we both grasped the chance;

    To live and have no taste of love,
    it's sultry smile and heated tears,
    is to have set one's self above,
    imprisoned firmly by false fears;

    Thankful for all emotion wrought,
    each memory a priceless pearl,
    the value of the heart well taught,
    our sacred waltz upon this world.


    Posted By Benny | Jan 4, 2007
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    that little note/quote under the title...caught my eye! (it's so true...to love: one must be prepared to be hurt, but be opened to be loved as well!).......
    nice piece BENNY!......demonstratin' the "two sides" of love!.....nicely written!......
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    Very true and wise words you have written here, Benny! Fear of anything can cripple us in so many different ways, always preventing the joy we could have had. Yet it is so darn hard to overcome!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 5, 2007
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    brilliant poem benny
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    Dear Benny,

    :wow::wow::wow::wow: A true masterpiece in content, and craft. Went straight into my favorites!!!!!!! I loved this!!! Beautifully written, beautiful word selection, and beautifully executed my friend!!!! Thank you for sharing this.

    {{~~**Kim**~~}} :yes:

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    Wow...I am indeed humbled by your words, friends. Thank you for reading this work.


    Posted By Benny | Jan 7, 2007
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    Dear Benny, I went back and gave this poem a five star rating!

    Kim

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    Thank you for rating my work! And, thank you for telling me how I can do it for other's work...I appreciate your kind words and encouragement!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 7, 2007
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