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    Azekiel-Horizon New Member

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    I possess a disbelief, in the Christian church.
    Due to all the hypocrisy coming from the congregations
    that provoke me to become more persistent with resisting their gospel.
    These counterfeit Christians, portray me as an atheist
    In contrary I am an agnostic
    There is a difference.
    Yet these hypocrites grip their bibles so tightly
    turning their palms devilish red
    and recite verbatim all the Psalms and Proverbs in the New Testament,
    with hopes of swaying my view.
    I rebuttal with my on verse but with no cursing
    because they ensured me I was already damned.
    Jesus Christ! all these damn "saints" are pestering me,
    they won't get down off their high horse
    and see they are intoxicated from what they dubbed the blood of Christ.
    I know its not "holy water" You can't fool me twice,
    I can smell the Merlot on your breath.
    So why want you religious addicts quit with the name calling,
    not all the other religions are terrorist group,
    because if I can recall
    there is this Christian group wearing white hoods,
    carrying torches,
    burning crosses,
    and are out terrorizing groups of Americans.
    but terrorist organization never gets mention when talking about the KKK.
    I will never understands these religious fanatics and their contradictions.
    if you truly believe what you are preaching,
    and you want to save my soul from damnation,
    Just leave me the hell alone and we will be good

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    the problem you have is that you are dealing with human beings who are on a good day, flawed. Add to that a basic lack of understanding on the part of humanity, throw in a dash of cynicism, and a teaspoon of bitters over bad experience and I would feel the same as you.

    Fortunately this is not the story. Every person must work out their own salvation. It's not between you and the church. My pops was a preacher and trust me I have plenty to be bitter about if I so choose. But I chose to be better. I left behind all the garbage and the concept of the "law" and justification based on works. Fact is we all suck at being faithful, which is what makes God amazing, cuz He keeps on loving. Whether you are agnostic, muslim, buddhist, or just plain confused, remember your standing and convictions have nothing to do with other people. I found my own reticence was based in my own pride and lack of understanding. Keep searching.

    Posted By zaac | Oct 31, 2011
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    lol! I like the writing style... gets your message across... on another note I feel like Jesus Christ would be standing on your side... He said to the hypocrites..."take the log out of your own eye, before you can talk about the speck in your neighbors eye" (not verbatim) ...

    pretty funny to send the church to hell... lol!
    agree with zaac... seek your own path... well, if you ARE interested in finding out more...

    nice read...

    nomad :beach:

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