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    Wind WindXSaul

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    To Write What Has Not Been Written


    I write what want be spoken to show what feeling can do when
    expressed to the fullest length. Take care though they seem as
    mere word the impact life and even can change the way you
    think even to the point it changes you in itself. I’m writing until
    the need to write is overwritten with brief and lovely words that
    can be sung and be heard from the sparkling seas of the Asian
    to the burning tundra of the desert. I grasp the word and show
    how much the mean to me when I write them just to speak them
    another time and have them shown to the broken hearted and cruel
    greed man of this day, Those whose grieve for the one the loved even
    those who have happiness yet the feeling of losing it in moments. Don’t
    worry the word I write are the ones that haven’t been spoken to the live
    of one that bring their emotion to the straight forward. Most who have
    no care for the thing they show so much concern for is the one I touch
    by such meaningless word from my mouth I will touch your soul with the
    word I see have no meaning to me whatsoever. Pardon my tongue if it
    insults you if I say that you left your heart in the dirt for regretting the
    past and staying where you felt comfortable never growing up to be
    the person you were meant to be I laugh at you for forgetting that reality
    is leaving you behind and turning in to a night mare for those in it.
    I hinder not to regret calling you a mere child who whatsoever can’t think
    properly and should stop for a moment and reflect your life and see what
    your thinking and be touched for what you’ve done. So I say though
    I may hurt help or heal I’m writing the word of which has not been writing
    nor seen eye of such people though I write this word they have no
    meaning to me and I take time to think. I ‘m writing the word that has
    not been written to be seen today tomorrow and in the late future.


    Posted By Wind | Feb 13, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    I like this poem. There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors though, which sort of draws my attention away from the essense of the piece though.... That's not a good thing. You may want to revise for spelling/grammar issues.

    That having been said - This has a sort of mystical vybe, who can write the word that has never been seen before? Jesus, God, A messiah or diety of some sort...?

    Makes for an interesting read. Thanks for the share ;)

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Feb 19, 2012
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    Wind WindXSaul

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    i thank you both ...and i will keep striving to become better


    Posted By Wind | Mar 8, 2012
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    Very insightful and beautiful.

    Keep sharing your words, and your truth.

    Our words are very powerful, to others and to ourselves.

    Love
    Morning Star

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