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    The nights go on forever

    If you will only let it

    Tuesday Afternoon is never

    Something you can forget


    If you will only let it

    The soundtrack of your life

    Something you can forget

    Amid the toll of daily strife


    The soundtrack of your life

    “The Days Of Future Passed”

    Amid the toll of daily strife

    The sounds of questions asked


    “The Days Of Future Passed”

    Tuesday Afternoon is never

    The sounds of questions asked

    The nights go on forever


    Mjcarson

    7-10-2007


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jul 10, 2007
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    ~Serenity~ ~Pixie Princess~

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    Hiya Mike!! Neat effect here... I think I saw some form like this somewhere, but I must be a little scatter-brained right now cause I can't remember =) Some very neat ideas too.. I'm gettin' all caught up in whimsical thoughts here... So fun =) I think my favourite is the second stanza, just cause of what its saying... It really is pretty easy to forget sometimes, I'm bad for that =)

    So hey - why Tuesday? hehe... Think I'd prefer Saturdays =)

    Thanks for sharing, and keep on writing!

    Smiles!,
    ~Serenity~


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    Hi serenity. This is a pantoum, I just learned it from my daughter who's a year older than you. It is also an ode to a classic rock album and classic rock band "The Days Of Future Passed" by The Moody Blues. "Tuesday Afternoon" and "Nights In White Satin" are major songs off of the album. As this was recorded in 1967, it is easy to forget even for the people who love it. It's my job to make sure that doen't happen,lol. Also to introduce a whole new generation to thier great music. This album was recorded with the London Philamonic and is a great treasure.Listen to either or both of those two songs and you will know!


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jul 10, 2007
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