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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Sep 3, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Twilight Ride

    A soft breeze blew flowed through the leaves of the trees
    The birds were singing sweet melodies
    The scent of wild-flowers and honeysuckle filled the air
    Flower petals drift from the cherry and apple trees

    Drifted through the breeze this spring twilight
    Along the edge of the grove were lush green ferns
    As she rode amidst all this splendor of nature
    So quiet and tranquil
    ~
    Her beautiful stallion born on vast prairies
    Now stabled upon her ranch
    Protected from the symphony of summer storms
    And being hunted by man
    ~
    When she rode she knew her stallion was
    The brother to the mighty Zephyr,
    And the starlit night is their canopy
    As the skies darken
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    In the cadence of its hoof beats
    You can hear the majestic song that
    Mother Nature softly whispers
    In the moonlit grove
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    Freedom whispers on the wind
    When they venture out for a ride
    In natures magnificent twilight
    On this beautiful spring day


    Posted By Bear | Sep 3, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Bear,
    This is so beautiful. I imagined it all the way through and found the most pleasurable ride through nature into the twilight. This world you wrote is truly heaven. The honeysuckle and cherry blossoms are tranquility to my senses. They are like snowflakes that never melt away. Thank you for the beautiful stallion. I’ll care for him in my dream stable, and ride him through the forest of sweetest dreams until each dawn separates us.


    Posted By JolieH | Sep 3, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Jolie

    your very welcome sweetie So happy that you have enjoyed your twilight ride . Thank you so much for the fantastic comment
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Sep 4, 2007
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