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    Everytime you look at me,
    On the sight of your eyes I linger in a bit of belief,
    For the time of our eyes meeting,
    Was less as a second is brief.

    Two faces in a photograph,
    Was all you wrote on the note you gave me,
    Two faces in a photgraph,
    Smiling,
    And neither of them is me.

    I keep holding on to the dreams I used to see at night,
    And I think of the times you used to hate me,
    To need you, I think I might,
    Since at some hours of the days,
    All you did was look at me.

    Two faces in a photograph,
    Was all you wrote on the note you gave me,
    Two faces in a photgraph,
    Smiling,
    And neither of them is me,
    Neither of them is me...


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | May 12, 2007
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    Awwwwwwwwwww...,
    that must have been
    very hurtful??

    Others can be quite
    dreadful at times.


    Posted By Jeez | May 27, 2007
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    I loved this, you got talent, keep it up. It was a tear jerker for sure.

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    Hey, Jeez and deep_poet86, thanks for your comments. And yes, others CAN be dreadful, for me, more than sometimes.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | May 28, 2007
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    Dear Me,

    :wow: This was so poignantly powerful in all its brevity! How awful others can be. I got very misty on this one. You are one to watch, as for sure you are a great talent already. It is a blessing to watch your evolution as an artist. Great Post! Gave an excellent rating!

    Kim ;)

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