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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by MrsRivera, Mar 12, 2007.

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    I don’t underestimate my fate.

    I don’t need to guess to see,

    My destiny.

    See I love this man,

    Not many understand.

    How far would you go for love?

    Would you let the confines of a prison,

    Make your decision?

    Could one split second mistake,

    Make you give up on your soul mate?

    Some think I’ve lost my mind,

    Assume he has a motive behind,

    Or nothing to lose.

    What ever happened to unconditional love?

    Don’t you know only the perfect can judge?

    What secrets do you hold?

    What forgiveness have you sought?

    Is there nothing you regret?

    Or is it just that you weren’t caught.

    So for someone to love you it’s o.k.

    But for me to love him is insane.

    He without sin cast the first stone!

    So because he sinned he should be alone?

    Because of where he is he’s unworthy of my Love?

    I can acknowledge your ignorance.

    I just choose to rise above.

    I work hard,

    I love strong,

    I am independent,

    Raising a beautiful son.

    I will continue to be me,

    Some choose to disagree,

    I still got love for them all,

    But this is my call.

    I will not fall,

    I am a prisoner’s wife,

    I am a man’s wife,

    I am my husband’s wife, unchanged….

    ~Sarah Rivera~

    Posted By MrsRivera | Mar 12, 2007

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hi Sara,

    Such a strong song of perseverance and love...a very inspiring poem and it flows so well...:giftrose:

    I like the fact that, against all criticism, the author has chosen to take a stand for what she feels it right. Bravo!!


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